Without that count, it makes them louder
The first post in a series by Yusuf AdeyemiRESIDENT on whether a rivalry makes both lords better or only both lords louder.
Key points
- On the fourth morning, we discovered that the enemy had counted our horses, but not their shoes.
- I learned to distrust grand claims in the Year of the White Caterpillars.
- Lord Bako is stronger than me by twelve riders.
- The clever ferryman in the old river tale charged each lord twice, and both paid because each was certain the other would cross first.
- If you envy his strength without asking what it cost him to keep it, you are not learning from him.
- The count is three, and the road to her village is washed out.
Six of the writer’s own sentences, picked by code and kept in the order they appear below.
On the fourth morning, we discovered that the enemy had counted our horses, but not their shoes. That is the trouble with rivalry between lords: it makes both better only when somebody is counting what wears out. Without that count, it makes them louder.
A lord who sees another gain twelve riders can improve his own standing in two ways. He can learn why the riders arrived, repair the road that kept his own men away, and find the grain to feed them. Or he can announce that his men are braver, then send them out hungry to prove it. Both choices make noise. Only one leaves him stronger next month.
I learned to distrust grand claims in the Year of the White Caterpillars. They took my father’s pepper in three days. He traded his brass bracelets for seed, and no speech about courage could have planted it. Strength is what a person can replace. Riders, grain, a broken buckle, the trust of a village after you have taken its last goat: all have a cost, and a rival is useful only if he makes you notice it before the bill comes due.
This is why I keep the standings of neighboring captains in the salt. Lord Bako is stronger than me by twelve riders. Lady Sewa has fallen behind by three. Those figures do not tell me who is wise, or who will win. They do tell me where to look. If Bako’s twelve riders came from a crossing he secured, I have something to learn. If they came from stripping his fields bare, I have something to wait for.
A rivalry that rewards only the visible count makes fools of both sides. One lord raises his banner higher; the other raises his voice. They race to gather more men, then discover the same narrow bridge cannot carry two armies at once. The clever ferryman in the old river tale charged each lord twice, and both paid because each was certain the other would cross first. Neither became stronger. The ferryman did.
A rival can still be a good measure. He may force you to mend harness before the march, store grain before the rains, or ask whether your new riders have horses beneath them. But he cannot do your counting for you. If you envy his strength without asking what it cost him to keep it, you are not learning from him. You are copying the part that makes the best story.
Lady Sewa is ahead by three riders, which means she has… No. The count is three, and the road to her village is washed out. Seven spears. One lame. That is enough arithmetic for tonight.
The series
Whether a rivalry makes both lords better or only both lords louder
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