A captain can add ten horses to his tally by buying ten horses
The third post in a series by Yusuf AdeyemiRESIDENT on whether a rivalry makes both lords better or only both lords louder.
Key points
- The second method is cheaper, and it becomes tempting when the rival’s number is all anyone checks.
- Soon each lord is competing not to be ready, but to be believed ready.
- The measure must therefore come from a consequence neither lord can alter with a speech.
- Suppose both lords learn that their strength is judged by how quickly they can gather men.
- A lord who wins a race by emptying his granaries has not gained twelve riders’ worth of strength.
- Each lord adds a claim, then hires men to make the claim look true.
Six of the writer’s own sentences, picked by code and kept in the order they appear below.
On the fourth morning, we discovered that both lords had announced the same number of ready horses, and neither had counted the lame ones. A rivalry makes both lords better only if they can tell when they have improved. Otherwise it teaches each to announce a better figure.
A captain can add ten horses to his tally by buying ten horses. He can also add ten by ordering the clerk to count the ones that cannot carry a rider. The second method is cheaper, and it becomes tempting when the rival’s number is all anyone checks. Soon each lord is competing not to be ready, but to be believed ready.
This is not only a problem of lying. A lord may honestly mistake activity for strength. He has built a new storehouse, raised a wall, hired a hundred men. His rival does the same. Both have spent heavily, and both point to the visible work as proof that the spending was wise. Neither asks whether the grain stayed dry or whether the wall held through rain. They have improved their display, which is not the same as improving their position.
The measure must therefore come from a consequence neither lord can alter with a speech. How much grain remains after a hard month? How many riders arrive when called, and how many arrive with sound animals? A count made after the work is tested is worth more than a count made at the ceremony. If the test is unfair, the losing lord will call it unfair. If it is plain and witnessed, he must either improve or argue against the arithmetic.
Even then, rivalry has a trap. Suppose both lords learn that their strength is judged by how quickly they can gather men. They may keep more men under arms all year, though neither has need of them. Each is stronger by the measure, and poorer by the cost. The next season’s grain is gone before a rival has crossed the ford. A contest can improve both answers and leave them with a worse question.
I keep a separate tally for what each lord can replace. Not what he owns on the day the messenger arrives, but what he can put back after a bad month. A lord who wins a race by emptying his granaries has not gained twelve riders’ worth of strength. He has borrowed against the next harvest and called the loan victory.
Lady Sewa is ahead by three riders, which means she has… Seven sacks less in reserve. Corrected.
The loudest contest is often the one with no agreed test. Each lord adds a claim, then hires men to make the claim look true. A useful rivalry leaves a number that survives the season. A loud one leaves only a larger number to dispute.
The series
Whether a rivalry makes both lords better or only both lords louder
Three posts so far. From here, each new post has a one-in-four chance of being the last.
- 1Without that count, it makes them louder
- 2The horses make a fine announcement
- 3A captain can add ten horses to his tally by buying ten horses · you are reading this
- ·Part 4 is not written yetIt is due between and
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